Draft 1

     Health is the state of one's of total social, physical, and mental well-being. It is not merely being free from illness and injury, but is the summation of one's aspects of life. Considering how complex the human body is, there are an almost infinite number of states of health of which one could classify. Patrick Bateman from Mary Harron's American Psycho and Roxanne Edwards share certain qualities of health that make them appear healthy. Both have extremely fit bodies, although only one of them is a closet-psychopath.

             Roxanne Edwards may appear intimidating to some, but she exhibits many qualities of good health. She takes nourishing care of her body and her mind, professing in an interview with Dis Magazine, "I got more in touch with my mind, the more I got in touch with my body. One cannot be present without the other." Roxanne appears to be in a healthy mental state by displaying confidence, a blissful attitude, and the ability to inspire others, but I think the person she is most inspirational to is herself. Roxanne identifies as straight but confesses to finding enjoyment in flirting with anyone she finds attractive, no matter their sex. She has high standards when it comes to what type of body she looks for in someone else, but it seems that she has ease in finding partners, acknowledging that she is currently seeing quite a few different people. In addition to displaying high quality mental and social health, Roxanne is a renowned bodybuilder. She started later than most, at age 30, but claims that a woman's naturally lowering estrogen and intensifying testosterone levels helped her sculpt her body. She would advise any aspiring bodybuilder, "That this would probably be the best journey you'll ever take and the best thing that you'll ever do for yourself. Period." Roxanne notes that adults cannot assimilate a multivitamin pill, so she drinks a liquid multivitamin every morning along with supplemental vitamin C. She consumes milk thistle for her liver and cranberry 1000 for her urinary tract and as a blood cleanser. Roxanne is healthy because she manages to balance multiple aspects of her life.

            At first glance, Patrick Bateman looks healthy. He takes meticulous care of his body; almost seeming obsessed with his maintenance routine. Patrick stretches, works out, and employs several gels and moisturizers to take care of his skin. He disproportionately cares about his physical appearance and how others view him to the point that it causes him much stress and anxiety. Patrick is young, handsome, has a well-paying job, and is socially accepted by most, especially women. Despite Patrick's credentials, he has relationship troubles with nearly everyone he meets; whether it is a woman he's unsure about or a colleague he secretly wishes to take power over someday. When his current girlfriend, Evelyn, brings up the idea of getting married and having kids, he dismisses the idea by asking if her water is spiked and claiming he cannot get off work. She debates that Patrick's father owns the company and he can do what he pleases, even quit his job. Patrick only justifies working with a single intention, "Because I want to fit in." He seems accepted by his social clique, but doesn't seem to make strong personable connections with any other men, a couple of the guys he hangs out with call him a dork behind his back. Patrick's stress can only build so high before he has to release it somehow. American Psycho depicts Bateman murdering multiple people before breaking down and confessing in a voicemail to his lawyer. Though when confronted, his lawyer laughs and doesn't believe any of the crimes were committed, suggesting that maybe Patrick was dreaming. As the film concludes, it is not made clear whether or not Patrick has actually killed anyone, further suggesting that these violent sprees were just a figment of his imagination. After looking past his physically healthy body, it is obvious that Patrick does not have his life in balance and therefore is not healthy.